Sunday, January 4, 2009

...love...


You asked her to make do in a one room apartment…SHE did !
You got up at 3am to watch the World Cup…SHE made tea…!
You never had to worry about ur health,your mom,your kids…SHE did!
You sometimes forgot to say “I love u”…SHE never did!
You said something nice today and SHE cherished that moment forever..
You were at your all-time low… and SHE brushed her fingers through your hair..
And you knew She shared your pain!
You speak your heart..and She listens endlessly..coz itz just you on her mind..!
She smiles and wakes you up in the morning..and that’s what makes your day..!
SHE knows that she’s not at her pretty best…yet tries to make her up..
And SHE does this just for YOU!!


(Note: This blog is an inspiration from a recent newspaper ad.. the first two lines made my mind scribble the further thoughts!!!) 

7 comments:

Arpan said...

Nice thoughts...it reflects ur feelings for love...as usual...gave me another few reasons...what 'love actually' is...will definaitely copy a few lines... :)

Unknown said...

always knew u were good but never knew u were so good...!!!

my space said...

@arpan
thank u..it was a try on dis subject..ur blogs really inspires meh..

@attri
thank u so much dear...well these r some scribbled thoughts...may b d hidden part of meh.. :)
thank u..

unforgiven said...

Yeah, sounds about right. I wrote something with a similar spirit a while ago; just with an additional dimension.

kabandi---a rebel in my own terms said...

spot on girl... i dnt knw y i always dread to comment on ur writtings...may be coz u r the real inspiration...the one i look upto... keep penning such wonderful notes... as u say u superbly write well ya ;)

Himangshu said...

Liked your thoughts buddy

Unknown said...

That is an awesome poem! great work!